Jared Wright
12/13/12
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Wójcicka, Natalia. "The Living Dead: The Uncanny And Nineteenth-Century Moral Panic Over
Zimmerman, Brett. "Poe As Amateur
Psychologist: Flooding, Phobias, Psychosomatics, and The Premature Burial'." Edgar
Allan Poe Review 10.1 (2009): 7-19. 19 Nov. 2012.
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Final Revision
Edgar
Allan Poe’s “The Premature Burial”
Edgar Allan
Poe had a captivating way of telling horror stories. From poetry to fiction,
Poe’s diligent approach to cohesive writing and reliability to the audience set
his works apart from most other American authors published during the
nineteenth century. His ideas were thoroughly thought out, craftily worded, and
specifically structured in attempt to terrify the reader; therefore, his
success was heavily based on the audience’s perception of his work.
Transitioning his creative story structures into popular themes among American
society’s current affairs and social norms, Poe was able to establish a
developing rapport with his readers. His works were often published in local
newspapers where they were accessible to common folk living the Northeast. One
way Poe was able to commandeer the attention of his readers was by presenting
typical fears among society, such as being buried alive in the Philadelphia Dollar
Newspaper periodical, “The Premature Burial”. The presentation of the hushed
taboos of American society and the narrator’s eventual overcoming of his
cripple fear are prime reasons why Edgar Allan Poe’s “The Premature Burial”
should be included within the canon of early American Literature.
Born January 1st,
1809 in Boston, Massachusetts, Poe was the son of travelling actors
(www.poemuseum.org). He became accustomed to hardship at a very young age when
his mother passed away of Tuberculosis. His father left Poe up for adoption,
and he was taken in by John Allan and his wife. Allan was a successful tobacco
merchant; therefore, Poe was able to attend some of the best private schools
along the east coast and eventually enrolled at the University of Virginia. Due
to a lack of funds, he dropped out of the university and moved back to
Richmond, only to find out that his foster mother had passed away, like his
birth mother, of Tuberculosis. This tragedy led him back to his hometown of
Boston, where he enlisted at West Point Academy, and published his first
collection of poems. The Academy expelled Poe after only eight months of
service, and Edgar Allan found his way to Baltimore, where he found out his
foster-father, Allan, had passed away. He then married his cousin
Virginia, who was only fourteen years old at the time of their matrimony. The
couple was very much in love, and very much in poverty; which resulted in the
Poe family relocating time and time again along the Northeast. While spending
time in Philadelphia, Poe worked for the Philadelphia Dollar Newspaper, where
he published “The Premature Burial” in 1844. Less than three years after its
publication, Poe’s wife, Virginia, died of Tuberculosis. This loss devastated
Poe, and a few years later, he too, passed away
(www.poemuseum.org).
Poe’s background indicates that he
had an unpleasantly familiar relationship with death and the process of dying.
An orphan by the age of three, adversity was something Poe was forced to adjust
to at a very young age. These experiences may explain some of the content
within his poems, specifically, “The Premature Burial.” Obviously, dealing with
grievance was not an exclusive issue to Poe, as many of his readers too, experienced
the hardship of losing a loved one(s). Poe recognized this and utilized these
themes to create some of the most terrifying short stories in the history of
literature. Up to this point in American literature, many writers such as
William Bradford, Anne Bradstreet, and even fellow dark romanticist, Nathaniel
Hawthorne, presented themes of death and dying in their writings, but they
typically did so in a religious sense. These authors discussed the consequences
that arise after death based on one’s obedience or disloyalty to God. Hawthorne
even questioned the morality of science, and its manipulative powers that
contradict the Christian religion. Poe, however, focused on the mental torments
of fearing death itself, and the psychological battle one must endure to
overcome it. “The Premature Burial” takes this theme even further, by
presenting a protagonist with catalepsy who is plagued with thoughts of being
buried alive.
During the 19th century, when medical technology was still
primitive, death was a morbid yet controversial topic among society. Oddly,
taboo topics such as being buried alive made their way into common
conversation. Poe had this in mind when he wrote “The Premature Burial” for the
Philadelphia Dollar Newspaper, emphasizing his own troubles within a story that
not only relates to its audience, but also effectively portrays society’s
perception of a surprisingly popular taboo subject. These perceptions were developed
by real life examples of people awakening after they have been assumed dead and
buried. Steve Semiatin
references one of these horrific tales in a periodical published in History
Magazine, “In the 1850s, a young girl in South Carolina
supposedly died of diphtheria. She was quickly interred in the family mausoleum
because it was feared the disease might otherwise spread. When one of the
family’s sons died years later, in the Civil War, the tomb was opened to admit
him. A tiny skeleton was found on the floor just behind the heavy stone door. (History Magazine 11.5
(2010):9-11)”
Polish
researcher Natalia Wójcicka points out in her article “The Living Dead: the
Uncanny and Nineteenth-Century Moral Panic over Premature Burial” that
premature burial was such a frightening topic that legislature was passed in
order to prevent it:
“ [n]o body shall
be received [into the morgue] unless a statement on the part of an attending
physician or Coroner, whether he has found the following signs of death or not,
is with it: First – Permanent cessation of respiration and circulation. Second
– Purple discoloration of the dependent parts of the body. Third – Appearance
of blistering around a part of the skin touched with a red hot iron. Fourth –
The characteristic stiffness known as rigor mortis. Fifth –Signs of
decomposition. (“To Stop
Premature Burial” 1899: 3)”
Furthermore, American entrepreneurs even
found ways to capitalize on this common fear. Wojcicka points out that a few
companies patented an alarm system for coffins, just in case one was to awaken
from their “terminal” state: “In the spirit of the Industrial Revolution,
innumerable plans for vaults allowing proper ventilation, with their own food
and water supplies and the means of communicating with the outside, were drawn.
Blueprints of so-called “alarm” or “safety” coffins, equipped with mechanisms
that would set off an alarm signal in response to the slightest movement of the
body within, were created, patented and sold.” Not only did these “safety”
coffins exist, they were a popular item, selling thousands a year (USPTO,
patent number 4,367,461). Steve
Semiatin addresses in his periodical in History Magazine that “Even our heroic first president, George Washington,
supposedly had such a dread of being buried alive that he ordered his servants
to allow his corpse to remain in his bed for three days, to be jabbed and
prodded with needles to verify his death before being laid to rest. (History
Magazine 11.5 (2010):9-11)”
This societal phobia of premature burial, or Taphophobia, was rooted within a lack of medical technology
and procedure in pronouncing someone as ‘deceased’. In many cases, medical
conditions that may cause its victim to appear to be dead, such as the
narrator’s case of catalepsy, led physicians to pronounce a patient as deceased
without any procedure to confirm that the subject was, in fact, no longer
alive. According to George K. Behlmer’s journal article of British
studies: “Late-Victorian fears about premature burial constituted a moral
panic‟ in the sociological sense of that term” as they contained the three
traits characteristic for this sociological phenomenon which “involves popular
overreaction to a perceived threat,” has a “tendency to occur when ethical
boundaries seem blurred,” and becomes a “process by which disciplinary agents –
police, prosecutors and judges – help vilify the socially marginal. (2003;42(2):206-235”
Although Behlmer’s points out that Taphophobia was generally an overreaction to
folklore and actually stemmed from a lack of legislation requiring a physician
to physically examine the patient before pronouncing him or her dead, the fear
itself still existed. For someone who suffered from a disease such as
catalepsy, thoughts of waking up in a coffin could lead to madness as it does
for the narrator in the story. His vulnerability allows the reader to
emotionally connect with the character while developing a relationship that
allows Poe to convince him or her into sharing these same fears. This becomes
evident when the narrator describes the perimeters of his condition:
“Its
variations seem to be chiefly of degree. Sometimes the patient lies, for a day
only, or even for a shorter period, in a species of exaggerated lethargy. He is
senseless and externally motionless; but the pulsation of the heart is still
faintly perceptible; some traces of warmth remain; a slight color lingers
within the centre of the cheek; and, upon application of a mirror to the lips,
we can detect a torpid, unequal, and vacillating action of the lungs. Then
again the duration of the trance is for weeks—even for months; while the
closest scrutiny, and the most rigorous medical tests, fail to establish any
material distinction between the state of the sufferer and what we conceive of
absolute death.” (Poe, “The Premature Burial”)
Even if the fear of
premature burial was over-exaggerated during this period, such conditions could
lead anyone to believe it was a possibility.
Despite the grave nature of the short story, Poe offers an interesting source
of relief from the narrator’s overbearing psychological condition. While upon a
ship, he falls asleep in a small wooden area beneath the ship and dreams that
he has been buried alive only to awaken with an epiphany:
“There
arrived an epoch -- as often before there had arrived -- in which I found
myself emerging from total unconsciousness into the first feeble and indefinite
sense of existence. Slowly -- with a tortoise gradation -- approached the faint
gray dawn of the psychal day. A torpid uneasiness. An apathetic endurance of
dull pain. No care -- no hope -- no effort. Then, after a long interval, a
ringing in the ears; then, after a lapse still longer, a prickling or tingling
sensation in the extremities; then a seemingly eternal period of pleasurable
quiescence, during which the awakening feelings are struggling into thought;
then a brief re-sinking into non-entity; then a sudden recover. (“The Premature
Burial”)”
He
realizes through somewhat of a near death experience that he has become a victim
of catalepsy, and through this realization he is able to overcome his crippling
fear. It is important to mention that there is no divine intervention or
outside therapy that advocates this realization, but rather, it occurs through
a true experience. Astoundingly, Poe references psycho-therapy concepts
introduced by Sigmund Freud, who was not even alive during the time of the
story’s publication, that suggest one may overcome fear by facing fear itself,
which in this case, is death. This empowerment of the self is a refreshing
aspect of early American literature and an important representation of dark
romantics such as Edgar Allan Poe.
The canon of American literature honors works which exemplify major themes
within a time period, and Poe’s “The Premature Burial” should absolutely be
part of this collection. His diligent approach to writing, where the reader’s
interests are the main focus of his message, is a creative and refreshing
reminder of the power of fiction. Additionally, Poe’s allusion to the power of
the self in overcoming fears as crippling as death is well ahead of the time
period. The story works on so many levels: as a horror story, a satire, and
even a psychological analogy. Therefore,
it is important that scholars recognize these attributions, and never forget
the power of social taboo’s and their effect not only on literature, but the
psychological consequences that arise from them.
Works Cited
Moorshead Magazines, Limited. "Buried Alive!
Premature Burials." History Magazine 11.5 (2010):
9-11. History Reference Center. 19 Nov. 2012
Poe, Edgar Allan. "The Premature Burial."
Works of Edgar Allan Poe -- Volume 2. 101-110. n.p.:
Project Gutenberg Literary Archive Foundation, 2006. Literary Reference Center.
20 Nov. 2012.
Wójcicka, Natalia. "The Living Dead: The Uncanny And Nineteenth-Century Moral Panic Over
Premature Burial." Styles Of Communication
2010.2 (2010): 176-186. Communication &
Mass Media Complete. 19 Nov. 2012
Jared,
ReplyDeleteWhile a full biographical background is effective for someone unfamiliar with Poe, consider its function in this introduction. Your purpose is to argue why this particular story of Poe's should be recognized. With that, do you really need some of the extraneous biographical facts that pertain to all his stories? I would narrow the biographical information to only the essential happenings that legitimize and support his experience with death. If done, that will effectively contextualizes "The Premature Burial."
Your prose and word choice are clear; however, I would integrate the dropped quotes into your text a little more. I felt the urge just to skim over those, and professor see those as a flag that you were short on word count.
Godspeed, my friend!
I thought the introduction was well written. I enjoy some of Poe's works, but had never really heard his background before, so I thought having that in your introduction was helpful and interesting. Overall the sentence structure and word choices worked well for your draft. I also thought this was an interesting text, and the background information on how people viewed death was helpful and added merit to what you were saying in your introduction. This information also made a clear statemtnt about why it should be included in the canon.
ReplyDeleteI really loved "The Premature Burial", and thought that your introduction was interesting and informative. I didn't realize that being buried alive was such a popular fear, and I was really surprised when you mentioned that even George Washington had been afraid of this.
ReplyDeleteOverall, I think your introduction was well-written, but I do think that you could possibly shorten some of your quotes. I don't think you need to include such large quotations from the story itself because they take up space that could be used for analysis. Most likely, people reading this introduction have already read "The Premature Burial", therefore, the larger quotes from the story don't need to be included. You could probably shorten them, or maybe paraphrase. Also, I think you could expand on some areas. I didn't really understand how Poe was referencing Freud's ideas about psycho-therapy. Perhaps maybe more explanation would help?
All in all, this was a great introduction written about a very interesting story.
I think you had a good balance of analysis and historical background in this introduction, which was blended together really well. It was really easy to follow due to sentence and paragraph structure and made me interested in reading the story. Some of the quotes were quite long, so my suggestion would be to shorten the quotes, or go into some more analysis on each one to make the length more relevant to the analysis.
ReplyDeleteOverall it is a good introduction that has made me interested in reading the story.
I thought your introduction was written very well. You established a clear thesis and broke up the information into solid paragraphs. I really enjoyed the research you included on the fear of death, especially about Washington. However, you mention that speaking of death was “controversial” and “taboo,” back then, but you never really explain how. Did people think it was inappropriate? Also, I feel that there are some sentences with precise information that you probably should include a citation for. That being said, great work!
ReplyDeleteJared,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting piece to read. Even though it is a work of fiction, the story deals with very real fears of the day. I also like the outside sources that you used to explain the text. I would have to agree with the comment on some of the biography of Poe being a little extensive just because he was so well known but I did like how you used Freud to talk about it. Nice work.
Jared,
ReplyDeleteYour introduction was clearly written and well organized. However, I did notice an excessive amount of biographical information about Poe. Although a brief biography of the author adds an interesting layer to an introduction, an excessive amount can take away from your particular argument. For example, your readers may be lead to believe that Poe's ideas stemmed mainly from his personal experience rather than the culture and general ideas of that time- which is ultimately what you are arguing.
I also never really got a thorough answer to why this work should be added to the canon. You touch on this answer several times throughout the intro; however, it is never fully explained. I noticed that many of the intros that I have read so far begin to answer this question towards the end, but never fully expand on the idea. I think all you need to do is add a little more to your final paragraph. Other than that, well done.