Kellie
Johnson
Professor
Coronado
Archive
Assignment
20
November 2012
Ball
Game Manuscript Rough Draft
Origin
and Beginning of the Game of Ball that the Apalachee and Yustagan
Indians Have Been Playing Since Pagan Times until the Year of 1679,
is a record written by a spanish clergyman,
Reverend Father Friar Juan de Paiva, who was stationed at the spanish
mission settlement of San Luis de Talimali. The purpose of the
spanish mission settlements was to convert Indians to and educate
them in Catholicism, and as a Friar at San Luis de Talimali, Juan de
Paiva was considered a spiritual shepherd or leader to the Apalachee
people. (Perron). In the writing of this manuscript, Juan de Paiva
was aided by two interpreters, one of which was an Apalachee leader,
who helped him better understand and translate what was told to him
by the Apalachee people, this allowed him create a more accurate
account since it was based not only on his own observations, but also
the the knowledge passed on to him by the Apalachee people. Juan de
Pavia's work was written in September of 1679 not as a document to
explain Apalachee culture, but as a document stating why he believed
that the ball game, played by the Apalachee people, should no longer
be played. Because of the nature of this document, it was seen by the
people it concerned , but not published into a work until 1982. In
1982 John H. Hann, published it as part of a larger work on the
Apalachee people, called Apalachee:the
Land Between the Rivers. Hann's use of the document
helps to show the historic value that can be found in it.
(Early visions of Florida).
While
Juan de Paiva may have intended for his document to communicate why
he believed the Apalachee people should no longer play their ball
game, in doing so, he provides a very detailed description of the
Apalachee tradition. This text is enormously valuable due to the fact
that there are not many of its kind that exist. It is one of very
few document in existence that provides a written first-hand account
of a Native American custom. Many of the Native American tribes did
not have a written language and so did not have a written record of
their history or culture. Not only does Origin
and Beginning of the Game of Ball that the Apalachee and Yustagan
Indians Have Been Playing Since Pagan Times until the Year of 1679
provide documentation of a piece of Native American
culture, but has the added benefit of being a first- hand account, as
it was written by Paiva who actually viewed the game, and spoke about
it with the Apalachee people. Through this document, a piece of
Native American history is preserved in a way that would have been
impossible without a written record. Had the history of this
tradition simply been passed on verbally throughout generations, as
was common, it would have no doubt, been changed and distorted over
time, but, contained within a written work it has been able to remain
unchanged no matter how many generations separate it from when it was
written to the present time. Clearly this makes Juan de Paiva's
manuscript a valuable piece of American literature, but its value
does not end with its ability to preserve a part of Native American
culture. The value of this document extends even further than that.
There
is great value in a work that can preserve traditions namely those
that would have otherwise died and been forgotten. If that was all
that Juan De Paiva's manuscript on the Apalachee ball game
accomplished, it would still be an incredibly valuable text, but
Paiva's document manages to accomplish more than that, increasing the
value of such a text. Origin
and Beginning of the Game of Ball that the Apalachee and Yustagan
Indians Have Been Playing Since Pagan Times until the Year of 1679,
additionally provides insight into Spanish- Indian
relations in southeastern America during this time period. First,
this document shows the very religious tones in the relationship
between the Spanish and the Indians. This can be seen not only in
existence of the missions, but also in Paiva's reasons for writing
the text in the first place. Paiva wrote this manuscript to express
why he believed that the Apalachee people should no longer play their
traditional ball game. One of Paiva's main reason's for wanting the
game banned was because he believed it to be pagan and harmful to the
salvation and wellbeing of the Apalachee people. Paiva's work is
religiously based, as is his reason for being among the Apalachee
people in the first place. While not all Spanish interaction with the
Indians was religiously based, the interaction on the Spanish
missions certainly was (Spanish
Missions).
Another
aspect of Spanish-Indian relations in San Luis de Talimali that can
be seen in Juan de Paiva's manuscript, it the way that Native
American culture and traditions are treated. From this document on
the Apalachee ball game, one can see that Juan de Paiva expected
certain Indian traditions to be abandoned. In this area, religion is
once again an aspect. The Spanish expected the Indians to abandon
their native religions and convert to Catholicism. The undertones of
this desired conversion can be seen throughout the entire text, and
once more can even be seen in the existence of the text itself. If
the Spanish did not clearly expect the Indians to convert to
Catholicism, there would have been no reason to dismiss their ball
game on the grounds that it appeared to be a pagan practice. In
regard to culture and tradition, this text shows that religion was
not the only cultural aspect that the Spanish expected the Indians to
give up. The ball game played by the Apalachee was considered one of
their oldest traditions, It served as a form of sport, recreation,
and as a way to settle disputes between tribes and clans without
resorting to war. This aspect of their culture was valuable and
important to the Apalachee people. Jaun de Paiva recognized all that
the ball game represented to the Apalachee people, and still expected
them to give it up and adopt "more civilized" forms of
recreation, or rather, a more spanish-like culture. This text give a
first-hand look into Spanish dealings in regard to Native American
culture and tradition, and shows how the Apalachee were expected to
adapt to the Spanish ways, rather than the Spanish adapting to the
Apalachee ways, regardless of the fact that it was the Spanish who
were the newcomers in the Indian's native land.
There
is so much about the relationship between the Spanish and the Indians
in southeastern American that can be learned from Origin
and Beginning of the Game of Ball that the Apalachee and Yustagan
Indians Have Been Playing Since Pagan Times until the Year of 1679
still another thing that can be seen through this
text is the power relationship between the Apalachee and the Spanish.
One can see that the Spanish felt themselves to be superior to the
Indians, in that, they expected the Indians to convert to their
religions and their ways. If the Spanish did not believe their ways
to be better, than there would have been no need for conversion. In
his manuscript, Juan de Paiva also assumes that he should be able to
stop the Apalachee people from playing their traditional ball game.
To be able to order the Apalachee people to cease one of their oldest
traditions, than the Spanish must be in a place of power over them,
or else they would not be able to make the Indians submit to what
they wanted.
America
even in the 1600's was a diverse place, but when looking at commonly
read early American literature the vast majority are works by people
of english descent. In reading Origin
and Beginning of the Game of Ball that the Apalachee and Yustagan
Indians Have Been Playing Since Pagan Times until the Year of 1679,
as a piece of early American Literature it broadens
the window of who the early Americans were. There are not many
commonly read early American works by authors of Spanish descent,
never the less, the spanish role in early America was still important
and influential to the development of the America that is known
today.
Origin
and Beginning of the Game of Ball that the Apalachee and Yustagan
Indians Have Been Playing Since Pagan Times until the Year of 1679,
as a text has so much to offer as a piece of
American literature. It serves to educate the reader culturally,
giving unique insight into a piece of Native American tradition. It
is enlightening historically in many ways, and gives the reader a
better understanding of the people who inhabited florida in the
1600's. The text provides a unique first-hand look into various
aspects of the relationship between the Spanish and the Indians,
including their power relationship, and views on customs and
religion. This manuscript is valuable treasury, containing a wealth
of knowledge and insight. While not a commonly read text, it has much
to offer its reader.
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Paiva, Juan. "Early Visions of Florida." Juan De Paiva,
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Mikaela. "Early Visions of Florida." Early Visions of
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Kellie,
ReplyDeleteYou have well-developed paragraphs with compelling research. I have a few revisions for you:
Your first paragraph establishes the context and scene; however, it ends with a rather weak thesis statement. It is as follows:
"Hann's use of the document helps to show the historic value that can be found in it. (Early visions of Florida)."
What use? What historical value? How does it show this? If you use stronger, more specific wording here--the reader will know what to look for. The thesis statement is really your chance to prove why the next paragraphs are important, so expand or clarify this.
I would like compliment your topic sentences in the body paragraphs; they clarify the text that each body paragraph contains. Consider these when revising your thesis.
In short, read through your writing because there are some typos, funny word choices, and style errors.
Cheers!
Honestly, I liked this. I did, but at the same time I had a difficult time trying to keep everything focused. Maybe it's because i don't know, exactly, what your thesis is that it might have thrown me off.
ReplyDeleteThe text sounds interesting, but I felt like there was a lot of information dumb going on, and not enough actually going through the text. I know this isn't an analysis paper, but at the same time having a little of that wouldn't hurt either.
I also had a difficult time trying to keep up with the general structure of the intro. Maybe it was the word choices or how it felt like the intro was going all over the place, so possibly tightening up that thesis could fix this.
And just an FYI, MLA doesn't require website links anymore. And if you could have some more in-text citations that would be great, because I would just want to know where you get all this great information!
I hope this helps in some ways!
This was a well-written intorduction, and I got a good idea of what you were talking about. There were some minor spelling and grammar mistakes throughout that you may want to check on, such as forgetting to capitalize proper nouns. You reuse the word "value" a little too often, and you also might want to check on the formatting for in text citations.
ReplyDeleteOther than that, the only things I'd suggest are strengthening your thesis and using some quotes, but you seem to have done a lot of good research. Good luck!
You have a lot of great information in your introduction. That being said, I did not see a clear thesis until the end, so strengthening it in the beginning would give readers a clearer picture of what your argument is throughout. Also, look at your in-text citations again for MLA style. Some looked correct, but others were off. Finally, just watch for capitalization errors, especially with cultures. There were many times where Spanish and English were not capitalized. This is a great start though!
ReplyDeleteThis paper was a refreshing step to a relatively unknown topic. I learned a lot of new things from this essay. Prior comments suggest working on a thesis statement, which I would agree with. The paper has little direction in terms of proving an overall point (why should this be included within the canon of American Literature?) The answers are, in fact, in the essay, but have no linear direction in supporting a thesis.
ReplyDeleteGood luck!