tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5596782513561631054.post7212418224570261528..comments2013-04-23T09:23:37.902-05:00Comments on Adding to the Canon: Early American Literature Revisited: Kami Fortner Final Post "Freedom Through Faith"Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5596782513561631054.post-55030460289477656982012-12-08T11:23:46.286-06:002012-12-08T11:23:46.286-06:00This introduction is very informative and well wri...This introduction is very informative and well written but I don't see the argument to include it in the cannon. The stories you relate from the actual text can lead me to assume why you think it should be included, but you don't actually say that in the introduction. It does summarize the work well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01231368162280628555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5596782513561631054.post-49798857996909712722012-12-06T23:26:37.323-06:002012-12-06T23:26:37.323-06:00This was a great intro! You have so much going on ...This was a great intro! You have so much going on and I love the way you were able to mix in a lot of information with analysis and making it a great intro. I did feel, though, that some of your quotes were a little too much. While they were great and did wonderful things, I just felt so caught up in them that when it came back to you I was a little surprised. <br /><br />Also, this is an intro. While I think your piece is great, I almost don't want to read it because you have basically told me what happens. And I want to be able to want to read it, basically. If you can get away a little from summarizing too much I think this will be great!<br /><br />Overall, I enjoyed it! Great job Kami! Marybethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13515326797374090043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5596782513561631054.post-27731555675602029872012-12-01T01:45:00.909-06:002012-12-01T01:45:00.909-06:00I think you have a good start on your draft here. ...I think you have a good start on your draft here. There seems to be a good collection of knowledge and examples here. i do agree with Kellie that it seems to be a little strong on the summary side. Maybe adding a little more background information and explaining more about why this text is so important to the canon would help enhance the introduction side of it. I think it is well-written overall. It offers interesting information and made me want to read the text, which is good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03700091561450201474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5596782513561631054.post-11090847989026776662012-11-28T23:38:33.664-06:002012-11-28T23:38:33.664-06:00I really enjoyed reading your rough draft, but it ...I really enjoyed reading your rough draft, but it seemed more like a summary than an introduction to the text. Kelliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10034400150094158393noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5596782513561631054.post-27837942522083429412012-11-20T13:00:00.890-06:002012-11-20T13:00:00.890-06:00Soveraignty and the Goodness of God<a href="http://mith.umd.edu/eada/html/display.php?docs=rowlandson_narrative.xml" rel="nofollow">Soveraignty and the Goodness of God</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04576941976029971772noreply@blogger.com